“There he is, get him,” he heard a low voice call out. Before he
can register what was happening, his purchase of wrenches from the hardware
store was knocked out of his hands, and he felt handcuffs around his arms. He
found his nose touching the cement on the sidewalk. Instinct told him to
struggle so he did. But pain shot through his arms as the policeman pushed his
arms into his back.
“You have to right to remain silent-“ The cop rambled on about
Jonah’s rights, but Jonah wasn’t paying attention. He was still trying to figure
out why he was on the ground with a police sitting on top of him. Questions
floated around in his head, but he wasn’t able to pin an exact one, things were
going to fast. Why am I on the ground? What just happened? What’s going on?
How did this happen?
Eventually the police
finished his speech and dragged him into standing position. He began to inspect
his situation. From a glimpse, he saw that he had stumbled upon a crime scene.
Caution tape was tied from one oak to the next, and there were several police
cars littering in the street.
“Why are you arresting me? Jonah asked cautiously looking
back at the tall lean policeman. “What’s going on?” The policeman didn’t answer
him. Instead, with his fair hands still blood-draining tight on Jonah’s darker
ones, he took out his walkie talkie and began talking to someone on the other side.
As he talked, a
chubby policeman comes over and sneered as he gave Jonah the once over. Jonah
began to feel dread in his stomach. His lungs began to contract, and his breath
began coming in short and fast.
“It wasn’t me,
whoever you’re looking for, it wasn’t me!” Jonah began to say. “I just came out
of the shop, I don’t know what’s going on, but it wasn’t me!” The chubby police
man stands besides Jonah and scoffed.
“I promise. I swear, it wasn’t me! Jonah continued saying, feeling
the panic in his thoat. “I had to get a wrench because I didn’t have one to fix
my-“
“Save it,” the tall and lean policeman that was still holding
Jonah by the arm said.
“Why are you arresting me?” Jonah said hysterically, continuing
to struggle. “STOP ARRESTING ME!” he shouted. But they didn’t even look at him.
Instead Jonah was roughly pushed into the police car. As the door closed, he
continued shouting at the policeman. He banged on the window and shouted, but
none of the police paid any attention to him. After a while, Jonah began
to calm down and accept his ill-gotten fate. His face relaxed from his crazed
look to a more alert look, taking in everything that was happening outside.
When the policemen got
into the car, they found a still man in the backseat.
“Hey what’s up with him, why’s he not talkin’?” the tall lean
policeman said to his partner.
“Stirring up trouble back
there?” the chubby one said gruffly. They laughed as he started the car. As
they drove away, Jonah’s mind was as blank as a white sheet of paper. Here
he was, in a police car and he didn’t know why. What should I do? Jonah
asks himself. But no words or answers came into his head. It was like his
system was on lockdown.
Instead, he reasoned with
himself to keep himself calm. I’m a good guy. I have a decent job, don’t do
drugs, don’t disobey the laws, follow the norm. Why was I arrested then?
As he continued to think
about the situation he was in, he realized that he’d just have to wait until
they get to the police station so that this situation could settle. Maybe he’ll
get to call his family and have them pick him up from the police station,
hopefully they won’t ask too many questions. But knowing his mom, she’ll
probably burst into tears when he says the word police. She was always telling
him to do some good with his life and not be like her in her when she was
young. But that’ll only happen assuming the police realizes that they got the
wrong person. From the looks of what had just happened a couple minute ago,
they seemed to really think that they caught the guy.
“Man, you’re in some serious trouble,” the tall lean policeman
eventually said to Jonah.
“For sure. Possession of an illegal weapon, breaking and
entering, and stealin’ money and jewelry from that jewelry shop. You’ve got a
lot against you,” the chubby man chimed.
“Well, people like you are always causing trouble. That’s what
pays our bills,” the tall policeman added and he and the chubby policemen
shared a laugh.
For a brief second, the comment stung and woke Jonah up a little
bit from his trance. People like me, is
he judging me on my appearance? But only for a second. The situation he was
in was so extreme that his mind was still trying to gather all the facts and
besides, these were policemen. If he started fighting back, it’ll just show to
them that they were correct and then he’ll actually have something charged
against him.
No, Jonah thought. I’ll just sit here and hopefully
things will clear up when we get the station. The police will see that they
caught the wrong person and let me go. I’ll just keep quiet now and everything
will be OK. Jonah began reasoning with himself again, trying to calm
himself down and get ready for what he was about to face at the police station.
Turning his face towards the window, he realized they had
arrived at the police station. As the car slowed down into the parking lot,
Jonah came to a conclusion, This all happened just because I was in the
wrong place at the wrong time.
This story really capture the reader's attention because it makes you want to find out what is going to happen to Jonah. Also, I like the mysterious ending because is leaves the reader thinking and there is not really a right answer to what may happen once the story ends. Lastly, it represents injustice, which is a strong topic.
ReplyDeleteI love your story! Your writing is incredible; I felt like I was right there with Jonah the whole time. Your dialogue and Jonah's inner thoughts made it so real, as if I was experiencing everything Jonah was experiencing. By not completely acknowledging the injustice (though underlying and ever-present) you are drawing a completely brilliant parallel to society and how we refuse to acknowledge and own up to some of the injustices that we see. I am in complete and utter awe. Congratulations on such an amazing piece :)
ReplyDeleteYour story did a really great job of jumping directly into the action! The hook was very captivating and urged me to keep reading. I felt a real connection with Jonah and the injustice he was experiencing. Particularly, his inability to respond to the injustice like Shukhov couldn't in the prison camp. Overall, the story is very well written, and leaves me curious and questioning about what will happen next.
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